marine haiku

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The high stars

in the black sky

On a wide ocean

Light a scene

Of play on stage

In three acts ere

the curtains are

Drawn for a new.

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5 responses to “marine haiku”

  1. Veronica Avatar

    Beautiful oceanic imagery, Stephanie! All the beauty and tragedy of life condensed in a few verses!

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    1. Stephanie Suh Avatar

      Thank you, Verronica πŸ™‚ I love the image of the vast ocean and the ship sailing into the galaxy of the unknown in the background of the transient reality. I want to describe the finiteness of earthly life in the landscape of the infiniteness of the universe. πŸ™‚ Still, I wanted to portray it in a few words, which your artistic sensibilities have caught πŸ™‚

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      1. Veronica Avatar

        So many layers of meaning to unpack, Stephanie! You never cease to amaze me with the power of your imagination!πŸ‘

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      2. Stephanie Suh Avatar

        Wow! πŸ™‚ Thank you, Veronica! πŸ™‚ the compliment coming from a great writer of all ages, such as you, uplifts my spirit. πŸ™‚ Thank you for understanding and appreciating my works. πŸ™‚

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      3. Veronica Avatar

        Although I am extremely far from the title “a great writer of all ages,” knowing that you hold me in high esteem brightens my day! πŸ˜‰

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